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What it does
- Pain first, from frame one: Waffles up on the sister, going for her pie, while the narrator names what you already do: yell “off”, and he jumps higher.
- Why the usual fix fails: to him the yelling means everybody's excited to see him. Then the cost: the pie on the floor, the apologizing, not having people over.
- The fix, shown: the trainer has someone ring the bell again and again, and he only gets a treat on his mat; then she shows you how to keep it going.
- Payoff and proof: this Sunday he stays on his mat; a real owner's review (yelling got him nowhere, now he has a plan that works).
- Proof and offer: the 80,000+ counter, then the logo, “Get your custom training plan today” and Book Now. No price.
Music (full ad audio)
- A, in the video: Hail Mary (mischievous strings) → Feeling Happy (acoustic)
- B: Kidding Around (silly bass and mallets) → Feeling Happy
- C: Fun and Games (quirky brass) → Happy Spring (brass and flute)
Say B or C and I swap it. Mixkit recordings: free for commercial video, no credit line. Doorbells and the pie splat are sound effects.
Ad copy
Headline
Get your custom training plan today
Primary text
Every time someone rings the doorbell, your dog is on them before they're even inside, and yelling "off" only gets him more wound up. To him, all that noise just means everybody's excited to see him.
A Dog Academy trainer comes to your house and works on it right at your front door. She has someone ring the bell again and again, and he only gets a treat when he's on his mat. Then she shows you how to keep doing it after she leaves.
Dog Academy has served over 80,000 owners and pets.
If your dog jumps on everyone who comes over, get your custom training plan today.
CTA · link
Book Now · https://dogacademy.org/in-person-dog-training/book-training
How it was made
- Script: rewritten 2026-10-04 with the new method (hyperframes/docs/HUMAN-SOUNDING-COPY.md): plain joined sentences, no slogans, a real owner review for proof. Blind reads by Sonnet 4.6 and GPT-6 Astra: 7/10 "sounds human", vs 3/10 for a 73-day competitor winner shown beside it.
- Look: Pixar-style 3D (your pick from the style test). Characters, house and porch drawn first as sheets and set images; the door's hinge side and the doorbell are fixed in writing for every shot.
- Animation: researched Kling's own guide, Higgsfield's Kling 3.0 guide and practitioners first. Each clip now gets a one- or two-sentence prompt (who moves, how, one camera move), the start image only, and a length matched to its slot in the edit. Every clip then passed a frame-by-frame glitch check by two AI reviewers (Opus 5.5, Sonnet 5.5) plus me; normal motion blur is allowed, duplicates, vanishing props, identity changes and wrong limbs are not.
- Higgsfield: Kling 3.0 pro for all 11 shots (18 clips this round, 7 of them retakes). Voice: Holden on ElevenLabs v4.
- Cost: about 957 Higgsfield credits. −14 LUFS; every word checked by speech-to-text.
Script and timing
| 0.3s | Every time the doorbell rings, Waffles jumps all over whoever walks in, and the more you yell "off," the higher he goes. |
| 8.2s | To him, all that yelling just means everybody's excited to see him, so he keeps doing it. |
| 13.9s | Last time your sister came over, her pie ended up on the floor. |
| 17.5s | You spent the rest of the visit apologizing, and honestly, it's easier not to have people over anymore. |
| 25.1s | So a Dog Academy trainer comes to your house and works on it right at your front door. |
| 30.5s | She has someone ring the bell again and again, and Waffles only gets a treat when he's on his mat. |
| 36.1s | Then she shows you how to do the same thing, so it keeps working after she leaves. |
| 41.1s | This Sunday your sister rang the bell, and Waffles stayed on his mat while she came in. |
| 46.1s | One owner wrote that yelling at his dog got him nowhere, and now he finally has a plan that works. |
| 52.9s | Dog Academy has served over 80,000 owners and pets. |
| 56.8s | If your dog jumps on everyone who comes over, get your custom training plan today. Tap Book Now below. |
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