Video ad · claymation · 9:16 · 69 s · version 4

“Dear Mom”, rebuilt

The G2 script (best of the blind-judged drafts), voiced by Bram with real pauses, every shot on Kling 3.0 pro from a new starting still that shows the moment before the action. Gus's four talking shots are lip-synced to his own lines.

What changed from v1

  • Script: one connected story with jokes (“Honestly? You're very well trained.”, “I don't work for free.”), the trainer's verdict, a plan built for their street, and Gus asking the viewer at the end.
  • Voice: Bram on Qwen, your pick, with real beats: about a second of picture before Gus speaks at each new scene, and a music-only moment when the rain stops.
  • Picture: Kling 3.0 pro on every shot. Starting stills show the moment before the action (the coffee is still in the cup).

What it does

  • Pain first, from frame one: “Mom, I pull, you follow. That's why your shoulder hurts.” The whole line is on screen at once for sound-off viewers.
  • Offer earned in the story: the trainer builds a plan for their street; “Your custom training plan” appears on the map scene.
  • Proof: 80,000+ owners and pets, counted up as Gus says it, with “A trainer comes to your house.”
  • CTA: Gus asks the viewer “Is your dog walking you?”, then the logo, “Get your custom training plan today” and a pulsing Book Now button. No price.
  • Sound off works: every spoken word is captioned on its syllable in Dog Academy's font and colours.

Ad copy

Headline

Get your custom training plan today

Primary text

Your dog pulls, you follow, and your shoulder pays for it. Last week it nearly put you off the curb.

The new harness didn't change anything. He pulls because pulling works: he pulls, he gets to the squirrel tree.

A Dog Academy trainer comes to your house, watches one real walk on your street, and builds a plan around your dog, your route and the things he lunges at. You learn exactly what to do the second the leash goes tight.

Over 80,000 owners and pets served.

Get your custom training plan today.

CTA · link

Book Now · https://dogacademy.org/in-person-dog-training/book-training

How it was made

  • Codex image_gen: 11 new starting stills from the same character sheets (3 earlier stills reused).
  • Higgsfield: Kling 3.0 pro for all 14 shots; Sync Lipsync 3 for Gus's 4 talking shots. Voice: Bram on Qwen with acting direction per line.
  • Original music, quiet and comic in the rain, brighter when the trainer arrives. −14 LUFS; every word checked by speech-to-text.
  • Cost: about 210 Higgsfield credits (about $7): 89 s of Kling 3.0 pro including one retake, 4 lip-syncs, and the voice lines. Codex stills used under 1% of the week.
Script and timing
0.3sGusMom, I pull, you follow. That's why your shoulder hurts.
6.9sGusHonestly? You're very well trained.
10.7sGusLast week you nearly went off the curb, chasing me to the squirrel tree.
16.0sGusThe squirrel didn't even look up.
19.9sGusYou bought a new harness. I pulled in that one too.
25.1sGusSo you called Dog Academy, and a trainer came to our house.
29.6sGusShe watched one walk and said, "He's not a bad dog. He's walking you."
35.9sGusThen she built a plan just for us. Our street. The squirrel tree. Your shoulder.
44.0sGusShe showed you to stop dead the second the leash goes tight.
47.9sGusPulling stopped paying off. I don't work for free.
51.3sGusLook at the leash, Mom. Look at your coffee.
55.4sGusIs your dog walking you?
58.0sGusDog Academy has served over 80,000 owners and pets. A trainer comes to your house.
63.8sGusGet your custom training plan today. Tap Book Now.
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