v40 — your shortlist, compiled

Everything you said you liked, in one place, with the three things you asked for added. 24 ads, 48 masters.

What I changed

The price is now on every single one.

A new gate for it: the price element is checked on every frame for presence, minimum 32px size, and overlap against every other element. 0 missing, 0 too small, 0 overlapping across all 48.

What I left out, and why

DroppedReason
v37r2 W05 — Reverse / Signs of Damaged HairYour call: “the oil is coming out of thin air and it looks stupid”. It is a plate fault, not a layout one, so it is out until that plate is reshot with the pour sourced from something.
v22r2, all tenYou landed on “I don't like any of those.” Also still carries the masthead-block question.
The 174 before/afters“Forget all these.” The two that survive are W07 and W08, which are in this set.

Two things you should look at

The price line sits on the product on some of the v35 plates (group B). On B·W02, B·W09 and C·W04 it crosses a hand, an arm or a bottle reflection. The halo carries it and it reads, but it is not clean. Root cause is the one from earlier today: v35's plates run the product to the frame edge, so there is no clear bottom band. Reshooting those plates under the v38 band brief is the actual fix.

Two frames needed their headline moved to make room. Promoting the price meant lifting the bottom-slot roundels, which pushed one into “hair fast.” on W08's 4:5 — so that headline moved up 105px. And the price could not go under the headline on group A, because on W03 it landed on the dropper cap; it is seated in the bottom band on all three groups instead.

Gates — all 48 masters

GateA (8)B (20)C (20)
Text overflow000
Solid blocks over size000
Element collisions000
Meta safe zone10/1020/2020/20
Roundel over chrome000
Price present / sized / clear0 fail0 fail0 fail

Claims: groups B and C still carry the v35/v36 headlines — “REGROW HAIR FAST”, “Hair in Just 2 Weeks”, “GROW Healthier Hair Fast”. Those assert efficacy and timeframes Wonder has no evidence for, so this set is not cleared for placement. Group A is the same. Say the word and I will swap in the qualified hooks — the layout does not change, only the words.

A·W01 v37r2 plates — the four you kept

GOODBYE HAIR LOSS

A·W02 v37r2 plates — the four you kept

REGROW HAIR FAST!

A·W03 v37r2 plates — the four you kept

GROW Healthier Hair Fast

A·W04 v37r2 plates — the four you kept

IMPROVE HAIR THINNING

B·W01 v35 plates

GOODBYE GOODBYE HAIR LOSS

B·W02 v35 plates

REGROW HAIR FAST!

B·W03 v35 plates

fast regrow hair fast

B·W04 v35 plates

REGROW REGROW Hair in Just 2 Weeks

B·W05 v35 plates

GROW Healthier Hair Fast

B·W06 v35 plates

IMPROVE HAIR THINNING

B·W07 v35 plates

Goodbye HAIRLOSS

B·W08 v35 plates

grow out hair fast.

B·W09 v35 plates

REPAIR REPAIR DAMAGED HAIR

B·W10 v35 plates

REVERSE REVERSE Signs of Damaged Hair

C·W01 v36 plates

GOODBYE GOODBYE HAIR LOSS

C·W02 v36 plates

REGROW REGROW HAIR FAST!

C·W03 v36 plates

fast regrow hair fast

C·W04 v36 plates

REGROW REGROW Hair in Just 2 Weeks

C·W05 v36 plates

GROW GROW Healthier Hair Fast

C·W06 v36 plates

IMPROVE HAIR THINNING

C·W07 v36 plates

Goodbye HAIRLOSS

C·W08 v36 plates

grow out hair fast.

C·W09 v36 plates

REPAIR REPAIR DAMAGED HAIR

C·W10 v36 plates

REVERSE REVERSE Signs of Damaged Hair