Tired of shedding? GROW MORE.
one block over the top of the bottles; the caps rise into the promise line
CTA: SHOP WONDER →
Wonder v32
v31 re-set for contrast and sentence structure. Same ten plates, same measured devices; every sentence is now one block in reading order, bigger, white with the proven halo, and the pain word set in yellow. No new image generation.
What changed from v31 (your notes: contrast · sentence structure · bigger · colour on the pain word)
One block per sentence, in reading order. No more lead-in in one corner and the promise in another: Tired of shedding? GROW MORE. · SLOW TO GROW? Grow faster. · HAIR LOSS? Goodbye. · LOSING HAIR? REGROW in just 2 WEEKS. · REGROW what you lost. · the rotated spine on W02 and the split-ink W08 are gone.
Contrast. Tone-on-tone is out. Headlines are white Archivo 900 with the dark halo that carried v27–v30, on every field; the giant theme words are solid white (STOP on magenta) or solid ink (GONE. on amber) behind the cap. Chrome goes ink on the light grounds (B/A grey, white tee, white tank).
Colour on the pain. The pain word or line is yellow in every frame; the promise stays white; the italic turn takes whichever the sentence needs.
Bigger. Every block is set to the full width the plate allows: W01 GROW MORE. 197px, W02 150px italic, W03 175px italic, W04 REGROW 207px, W09 REGROW 187px, W07 210px italic, the W05 arc line up from 60 to 75px with the pain half yellow.
Kept from v31: the caps rising into the W01 line, the W05 arc fitted through the three cap tops, STOP and GONE. behind the caps with the honey stream in front, the wedge on W04 clear of her face.
Gates — r2, both ratios, all clean
| Gate | Result |
|---|---|
| Solid blocks over size | 0 |
| Text overflow | 0 / 20 |
| Element collisions | 0 |
| Meta safe zone | 20 / 20 |
| Legibility vs photograph (base-plate diff; halo'd type judged against its rendered surround) | 0 fail |
| Furniture over product / face / B/A result | 0 / 0 / 0 |
What is real
Product from the reference photograph in every scene. All proof is the genuine 4.8/5 from 1,121 Trustpilot reviews. Free shipping, skip-or-cancel and “$14 first bottle” are live PDP terms. People and before/afters are generated stand-ins for the design team to replace. Headline claims are deliberately unqualified per the brief and are not cleared for placement.
Slow to grow? Grow faster.
one block over the top of the frame, pain word in yellow, italic promise
CTA: START AT $14 →
Hair loss? Goodbye.
heavy pain line + big italic turn in the clear field, hair touching
CTA: SHOP WONDER →
Losing hair? REGROW in just 2 WEEKS.
one four-line stack in the pink wedge: pain · REGROW · in just · 2 WEEKS.
CTA: START AT $14 →
Thin, flat hair? Thicker. Fuller. Faster.
the whole sentence on the measured arc over the three caps, pain in yellow
CTA: GET 50% OFF →
STOP the shedding. For good.
giant white STOP behind the cap; the phrase in front, pain word in yellow
CTA: STOP SHEDDING →
Thin part, regrown.
proof frame: pain line yellow, italic promise white
CTA: START AT $14 →
Edges back by week 11.
proof frame: pain line yellow, italic promise white
CTA: SHOP WONDER →
REGROW what you lost.
one stack in the coral column: REGROW · what you · lost.
CTA: REGROW NOW →
GONE. Bald spot? For good.
giant ink GONE. behind the cap with the drip in front; BALD SPOT? in yellow beside the bottle
CTA: CLAIM 50% OFF →